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Suddenly I take a deep breath
A smooth beam caresses my face
The environment seems out of mess
It is like an atmosphere of odd grace

I open my eyes and stand awake
Amazed by exotic striking blossoms
I even perceive a miraculous lake
Departing from very high mountains

The panorama looks like a fantastic paradise
Birds are flying and aromas are fluttering
I even notice a man looking very wise
My emotions panic and my heart starts beating

I am fond of the air, the water and the sands
It brings a sensation that is one of a kind
It is like one lover giving another chance
That man was the reason of my happy mind
©2006-2009 ~crazygracy
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he is such a handsome angel...

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:iconwaata:
And this is such a gorgeous poem.

Very, very nice.
:iconcrazygracy:
thank you:)

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GraceY
:iconniadanielle:
great poem ... i espcially like the last stanza!
:iconcrazygracy:
thanks
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GraceY
:iconbroken-tears-poetry:
i really love this poem hun :glomp:

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(¸.·´ (¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·........ Hazel :heart:
:iconcrazygracy:
thanks
thank you very much for the fav
(K)(K)(K)

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